A revised poem, i think it's better but what do you think?
Feb 07, 3530 by Thomas | Posted in Poetry
"Mr. Fist"
So you say there's no "Mr.right"
That there's no man to hold you tight
to plead his love every day and night
You say that veracious love is long dead
to hear your pain fills me with dread
and weighs my heart down like guide
to hear that there's no good man for you
Gives me the need to say these things true
there is a man who'll love through and through
a man who sees your every word as a jewel
who won't do things that are so unjustly harsh
who will realize through your pain that he's a fool
someone who knows , in your wisdom, that your always right
who'll scold the jealous sun for trying to blacken as bright
who's every glance brings you a heavenly light
someone who bows at your divination
who can ease you in times of frustration
and swears your the informant of all creation
....but you say there is no such thing as love....
....you remain grounded and watch those above...
....who fly on the wings of heavenly doves...
....as you sit, and shield and have noone beloved....
don't worry about not being able to compare them, this one is better anyways, what do you think? any ways to improve it?
also the last four lines extremity to be fixed a little
i amity it
jana | Feb 07, 4007
I in effect like it, I honestly can't see any way to improve! I also like the last four lines just as they are!
Help with mine?
http://answers.yahoo.com/grill/index?qid=20090804233102AA2OSZF
Et tu Brutus? | Feb 07, 4049
You also have faculty. It's beautiful. I can relate to it in a way. I'm sure others can too. Nothing to improve leave it as it is. A poem can never be improved. As it ends it shall be Veracious.
monie.c | Feb 07, 6324
Anyone know the name of this old 90's PC game?
Feb 07, 408 by brill | Posted in Video & Online Games
I old to play it all the time in preschool. You played as a kid who had to get these colored keys or jewels or something to open their corresponding doors and you had to get so many to get to the next bulldoze. I think maybe there were rocks on one of the levels that you had to move to get to a key? There were a lot of levels, no one ever beat it.
Ughh it's bugging me but I can't remember anything else.
Thanks in promote
what inuyasha episode is....?
Feb 07, 7528 by Lil. Ra | Posted in Comics & Animation
when kagome finds kikyo sitting in a tree and kikyo shoots kagome and takes her jewel shards
is it illegal to download games off mininova if i can prove i legally own the software?
Feb 07, 5553 by Michael G | Posted in Video & Online Games
what i great is, i have quake 1,2, and 3. i've lost the cd but still have the jewel case so i can prove i own it, and have the cd key. would it be bad to download the software off of mininova and use that cd key with it even though i legally own it?
What do you think of my poem?
Feb 07, 3527 by Pocket Protecktor | Posted in Polls & Surveys
I tread the jeweled thrones of the Terra
In my sneaker'd pedals, always wandering,
Always wondering, stepping, walking, running...
And I like to run...
It leaves me in awe...and I wrote it...
I have questions about Rouge the Bat, how does she use her sex appeal to get what she wants?
Feb 07, 2443 by Happy magikoopa treehouse | Posted in Video & Online Games
When does she effort with GUN?
Sonic-X?
Sonic Adventure 2?
I know she's a spy for the goverment, but she's part theif too!
She'll get fired for being a jewel theif!
Why she's instrested in Contrive Shadow?
I know Rouge liked Shadow because he saved her, but Shadow doesn't show any romantic feelings for Rouge. I grasp he doesn't hide his feelings for her because he doens't have time to secretly like Rouge.
Please and thanks!
